Sunday, February 20, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday

Hi all! I had to miss last Sunday do to some unforeseen events. But I'm back! Something new I've started with my sentences this week is putting up an image that represents them.

This week, I was working on my current WIP, the last book in the Telomere Trilogy, Ending Eternity, and this fragment caught my attention as maybe a good one for this week.



"No, you just died emotionally to be rebirthed anew. Embrace your resurrection and allow your evolution to embrace you."

Luna looked back at the pool again, and the fish still playing with bubbles. The waterfall rumbled in the background and the wind whispered kisses along her skin. She could not thrive away from this, from them, from her way of life. She was heading to her end.

Hope you liked this week's sentences. Make sure to stop by the Six Sentence Sunday site and check out the other participating author's sentences. It's always a good bit of weekend fun.
Posted by Unknown at 5:00 AM
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20 comments:

  1. Sandra SookooFebruary 20, 2011 at 6:49 AM

    it'll be interesting to see what happens!

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  2. AnonymousFebruary 20, 2011 at 7:39 AM

    It's beautiful. The description takes me right into the story.

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  3. Chrystalla ThomaFebruary 20, 2011 at 7:51 AM

    Ohh, creepy and also beautiful! Very nice.

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  4. UnknownFebruary 20, 2011 at 7:59 AM

    Thank you Sandra, Graylin, and Chrystalla! I'm glad you liked them.

    Sometimes change is hard and poor Luna goes through a lot of them in this story.

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  5. Sarah GrimmFebruary 20, 2011 at 8:56 AM

    Wow, very intriguing. Can't wait to see what happens next.

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  6. Jessica E. SubjectFebruary 20, 2011 at 10:32 AM

    Wonderful description! I'm anxious to read more.

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  7. CasiFebruary 20, 2011 at 12:14 PM

    That sounds really dire. Like she's going to die. I love the style of the writing, it's really tranquil despite the subject matter.

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  8. Lisa FoxFebruary 20, 2011 at 12:41 PM

    Very haunting.

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  9. LaurelCKrieglerFebruary 20, 2011 at 1:22 PM

    beautifully written!

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  10. L. A. GreenFebruary 20, 2011 at 1:48 PM

    She seems to have reached some tranquil place in her mind that she's connected to, like it's its own landscape. Her thoughts do seem somewhat fateful though. Intriguing six!

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  11. Jayel KayeFebruary 20, 2011 at 2:15 PM

    very interesting

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  12. Taryn KincaidFebruary 20, 2011 at 3:04 PM

    Beautiful yet ominous.

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  13. Lauri J OwenFebruary 20, 2011 at 3:29 PM

    Intriguing snip!

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  14. Miranda BuchananFebruary 20, 2011 at 5:56 PM

    Super interesting. I'd read more for sure. Nice job!

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  15. Lex ValentineFebruary 20, 2011 at 8:04 PM

    That's so sad!

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  16. Lynne MurrayFebruary 20, 2011 at 8:24 PM

    Death and rebirth seem to be accepted with only a slight question by the heroine. It's a "what (and how) next?" situation.

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  17. BarbaraFebruary 21, 2011 at 6:07 AM

    Whoa! Interesting snippet, thanks!
    Barb

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  18. Pip GreenFebruary 21, 2011 at 10:10 AM

    Wow, the opening sounds quite ominous. Loved 'the wind whispered kisses along her skin.'

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  19. UnknownFebruary 21, 2011 at 10:19 AM

    Thank you all for your kind comments. Mucho appreciated!!!!

    Loving the new writers I'm meeting in the SSS fun...

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  20. ArleneFebruary 21, 2011 at 1:48 PM

    I love the show of tranquilty, merging into the end line which slams tension into the mix. I'd flip those pages.
    I got seriously sidetracted on sunday, but your snippet and that waterfall pic makes me so glad I popped over.

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