Sunday, March 13, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday

I thought with this Six Sentence Sunday I'd revisit my upcoming release, Duty and Devotion, that'll be out in June. Publisher edits started and a cover should be coming in the next month or two. Weeeee! So remember this isn't the final version, these sentences my be different in the final product.

Okay, here we go.

None of it sent her emotions into giddy delight and wonder as it had always done before. Tears streaked her face, and fear chilled her spine. Grief and guilt weighed on her heart.

Journey was dead.

Danny was missing.

I’m alone...

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10 comments:

  1. Nice! I'll bet your editor is really enjoying the story :-)

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  2. Oh wow, heart rending. Beautiful.

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  3. Very emotional six! Thanks for sharing.

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  4. Heehee...that's nice to hear Sandra!

    Thank you Graylin and Sarah.

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  5. Great portrayal of emotions through internal thoughts.

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  6. I agree, good show of emotion without telling! Thanks for posting!

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  7. Makes you want to cry for her

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